Poetry: Haiku for The Thoroughbred Racehorse

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By Barbsbitsnpieces

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Source: Barbara Anne Helberg (2010)

This is Thoughtful Thoroughbred Haiku from the Famous Horses who speak for themselves.


from Smarty Jones, (lost) 2004 Belmont Stakes -

My fans chant for me

While thundering hoofs I pound

Short of a twelfth Crown


from Point Given, (lost) 2001 Kentucky Derby -

Expectation's roars.....Fall before I reach the line.....Roses quickly lost


Source: Barbara Anne Helberg (2010)

from Funny Cide, (lost) 2003 Belmont Stakes -

Mud and slop hit me

Rain continued down and 'round,

Dismissed my own Crown


from Barbaro, (DNF) 2006 Preakness Stakes -

May Roses I wore.....Looking for Black-Eyed-Susans.....Gone in a bone snap

Source: Barbara Anne Helberg (2010)


from Curlin, (lost) 2007 Belmont Stakes -

Preakness record done

I closed in the Belmont lane

A girl's nose beaten


from Rachel Alexandra, (won) 2009 Preakness -

Calvin's on my back.....Rushing me along the track.....Rival boys get shocked

Source: Barbara Anne Helberg (2010)


from Zenyatta, (won) 2009 Breeders' Cup Classic -

Large long dark I'm unique

Hoofs heart stride shockingly good,

A boys race I take


from Monarchos, (won) 2001 Kentucky Derby -

Records I knew break.....When Roses await the score.....Big Red still stands tall

Source: Barbara Anne Helberg (2010)


from Fusaichi Pegasus, (won) 2000 Kentucky Derby -

I honor Japan

Tough ready none on my heels

Yet no new record


from Big Brown, (lost) 2008 Belmont Stakes -

Beautiful Ups brown.....Ready willing for the prize.....Changed my big brown mind

Source: Barbara Anne Helberg (2010)


from War Emblem, (lost) 2002 Belmont Stakes -

Derby Preakness won

Gungho my ancestors cry,

Stumble an upset


from Mine That Bird, (won) 2009 Kentucky Derby -

Sire beat Smarty Jones.....Birdstone brothers whisper soft.....Father's act renewed


Hoping these Thoughtful..... Thoroughbred Haiku reached well..... The horsey in you!

Comments

Binaya.Ghimire 9 months ago

Beautiful, awesome exploration.

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prashant angiras 9 months ago

i never thought anybody can write for horses...your hub is funny and interesting..

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writer20 Level 8 Commenter 9 months ago

Very interesting written, loved it.

My brother wanted to be a jockey only he grew too tall.

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Barbsbitsnpieces Hub Author 9 months ago

@Binaya.Ghimire...It's always rewarding to explore a new way to express ourelves as writers! Thanks!

@Prashant angiras...Our passion for something can bring out the result of written expression. Thanks for your note!

@Writer20...Tell your brother I think he deserves kudos for trying the difficult job of jockeying. (What did he do instead?) Thanks for sharing your kind remarks!

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 9 months ago

Haiku poetry, Interesting indeed. Well done!

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Barbsbitsnpieces Hub Author 9 months ago

Thank you, always exploring! I guess I like exploring, too! There's really no end to it if one enjoys the writing!

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J.S.Matthew Level 7 Commenter 9 months ago

Very cool and interesting! Voting up.

JSMatthew~

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Barbsbitsnpieces Hub Author 9 months ago

Thanks, J.S.Matthew! I appreciate your taking the time to comment! Our Thoroughbreds deserve it!

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